RHH-Rate This Freestyle Im Writing?

Ok This is my finger freestyle lmaoO so what ever pops in my mind ima write it so I know that it doesn't have flow and there's no topic for it but what ever its a freestyle.

Rate This Freestyle From 1 to 10?
Critisize/Rate/Hate

Hello world its me Mr.Gotham,
Do you have a problem,
Please use a condom,
Your Flow is a disease Put yourself in a column,
My young mind is corrupted,
parting me to be disrupted,
But im somebody you gotta put up wit,
**** I quit wit that bit I must admit,
I might be the smallest kid but *****,
I kick it up flip it blood no love,
Ima give you a lesson im messing,
With rhymes here as you see in this session,
Come to my ware house,
tell you girl to wear a teared blouse,
I trie to make my words really specific,
Solve the mathematical equation statistic,
im just building up the rhymes and lines,
Im one of a kind put a star a end even if im unsigned,
If being the finest is wrong I don't wanna be right,
Don't ghostwrite ight I rap till daylight,
It really will be tragic if I don't create magic,
Add me and the mic that's mathematic,
Im in the attic with a crack addict,
Im not gonna stop till my back hits the casket,
Visit me you'll find dead bodies in my basement,
But hey that's a statement,
Im function well you could tell by my flow,
There he go whoa what a nice combo,
Im Pac man I eat these weak mc's,
If they come at well they would never find me,
Well im done for now how,
Wow you want a encore well bye now.


RHH2-Buy Or Sell-
Tha Carter 2>The Blueprint 3








" RHH-Rate This Freestyle Im Writing? "

Freestyles aren't typically supposed to be written..
I'm not a big fan of ur rap. 5 tops. You need some more complex rhyme schemes and more internal rhymes. You're metaphors are a little lame. But assuming you wrote this all at once and didn't go back to change anything it's pretty decent.

And Buy. I'm not a big fan of Lil Wayne but I'm also not a big fan of Jay-Z. Tha Carter 2 was decent and The Blueprint 3 is decent but overall I think Lil Wayne wins this one.
it was alright, has potential but u need to put it together better


RHH 2, BIG SELL, BP3 = future classic
i give it a six. would need to hear it on a beat. but you got somethin there










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